His Master's Daughter

Biblical historical romance

By: Christina Rich

Narrated by: Virtual Voice

With no brothers to carry out her father’s legacy, Sh’mira, the maimed daughter of a prosperous farmer, must marry a man willing to leave his home. However, the only one who does not scorn her disfigurement is Ariel, her father’s bondservant. In exchange for his freedom, Ariel’s master offers him Sh’mira as a bride and the rights of a firstborn son, but the former Commander of the Temple Guard cannot accept the honor. He’s bound by a vow to protect Judah’s future king from the child’s murderous grandmother, but when the queen’s guard attacks the tiny village he’s been hiding in he finds he cannot leave his master's daughter.

Biblical fiction with suspense

I liked the characters and the story. Although it was a made-up story, it didn’t contradict Scripture.

Horrible reading.

The reading was horrible because the computer had no idea where to put any inflexions. The dialogue was very poor also. The lack of communication between the 2 main characters was astounding. The sister was so extremely mean and jealous. There seemed to be 1 main theme that was repeated over and over and over and over of the farmer's daughter not being able to marry whom she wanted because she herself would not allow it. It seemed like this book was read and written by AI. Horrible!

Good storyline- Horrible Narration

can't tolerate fake audio voice but wanted to hear the end of the story. i do like the author though

Interesting story.

The mis pronunciation by virtual voice of the Hebrew words:
Ima, Abba, Shabbat were bothersome to listen to

Seems very teenager back-and-forth, he loves me. He doesn't love me. She loves me. She doesn't love me.It just was too much.

The story took too much time with thinking, doubts and not enough with the story of the time and place in what occurred in that era. Not enough history.