A Fallen Sword

The Wolf and Viper Series, Book 1

By: Kaven Hirning

Narrated by: Abigail Reno

A Guild of Criminals.
A Guild of Heroes.
One Holy Weapon.

A book made entirely by rolling the dice.

©2023 Kaven Hirning (P)2024 Dreamscape Media

Twisted ending

Great story! The ending has me dying for the next !
You’ll love this author. Funny and gripping, it’s hard to put down.

A fallen sword

Purchased this book after I found the author on Toktok and immediately loved her. I could feel her personality throughout this book. Def kept me on my toes and eager for the next one! Highly recommended

Beginner writer?

The narrator does a good job, not a great job, but at least she’s good and not awful.

I didn’t bother looking to see if the author is a new writer or not - based upon the writing in the book I am assuming so.

The whole book has nothing going on it that makes me want to know more and in fact I’ve had to force myself to listen beyond the one hour mark. Since other reviews were so good I kept thinking the book must get better, I’m 3/4ths of the way through (3hrs left) and it doesn’t so I’m done with it.

The characters are not strong or unique or stand out in any way. In fact, the writing is such that I don’t care at all about any of the characters! There are none I want to root for, none I want to yell at, none that I care about in any way. I want a villain or a good guy or at least to hope that someone overcomes a challenge. Just give me any sort of feeling towards these characters other than indifference please!

It’s not that the book or the writing is bad, it’s too neutral and in my book that means not good.

I will be returning this one.

Not a strong main character

A litch is coming to destroy the world. The assassins guild and a hero’s guild join forces to find a legendary sword to save them all.

The main character is an assassin and she lends nothing to the group except to lust over one of the heroes. In many/most/all of the fights the group encounters, she quite literally does nothing

Painful to Finish.

Poor character development. Poor awkward dialogue. Every character has the exact same background story (ie trauma, ran off on suicide mission, joined a group). The “adventures” feel contrived. No build up. Why do I care about a world being destroyed when I know nothing about the world. I also hate how everything links. Like nothing was planned out in the book at all.