Nia and Jelani A love story 2

By: Rasheed Carter

Narrated by: Virtual Voice

No longer a scared little girl, Nia has become a survivor and matured into a beautiful person despite the traumatic abuse she endured at the hands of her aunt. Nia has been given an opportunity to live a rockstar lifestyle through her superstar boyfriend, the sensational drill rapper Jelani. Nia has everything that she ever wanted at her fingertips, including love, security, and a man who has her back against all odds. The past resurfaces and threatens to tear apart her happily ever after piece by piece.

Virtual Reader - meh

Well, great story. The ending felt rushed. Virtual Reader was horrible.... and I usually do not comment on the VR's.

ending

I liked the story the ending sucked big time. I wanted a different ending. I don't want to give it away but you know what I mean. But yeah it was cool.

The storyline was good!

Idk if it’s the AI generated voice that’s mixing all the pronouns but it would switch from a narrative POV back to the characters POV in the same second. BUT besides that , this story was good.

Jelani 🤨

He is a hot mess express. But I love how the story all came together.

Jalani was a good liar lol

Story line was good but it seemed like some editing needed the way the narrator was reading it