The Smith

Adventures in Town Building Part II Kingsford

De: Dwayne Hawkins

Narrado por: Virtual Voice

A complete rewrite and expansion of the original Adventures in Town Building
Part II Kingsford follows a seventeen-year-old Chet as he is summoned to the Kingdom's capital. His girlfriend, Princess Ilana, is delighted to introduce him to the rest of her family. He has made such a splash all the way out in the wilderness that the King and Queen want to meet him. Or maybe they want to see the young man whose bed their daughter delights in diving into.
During his initial visit, Chet starts finding issues that should be taken care of as soon as they can be accomplished, so he starts doing his best. He also can't keep his big mouth shut nor hide his passion for making the Kingdom a better place for all. The King develops a hobby of dumping responsibilities on Chet's ever-broadening shoulders. Or maybe it is the Quenn tasking him, hoping to distract Chet enough that he forgets his goal of keeping his clothes on around her.

good story, but

the writing is pretty good for what the story is supposed to be, a kingdom building slice of life. unfortunately the authors free use relationship type ideals just don't work for me. so the mc is in a relationship with a princess but falls in love with a prostitute who tells him keep sleeping with the princess because he should get all the experience he can before they wed. while she is apparently going to keep sleeping with whoever she wants while they as a couple it seems won't be sleeping together until the get married. what the hell sense does that make? we love each other but we will each keep sleeping with other people and not care but not each other. a couple of cucks in a relationship. and then the princess is all for the mc boning her mother the queen also and apparently the king is OK with his queen having affairs. so apparently in this fantasy world std's aren't a thing and having a slut or whore for a girlfriend or wife is a great thing. fantasy is one thing but maintaining some sense of reality is also pretty important. no readers can relate to relationships working like this. harems sure but cuckold and open relationship just doesn't sit well with most who would give this an honest try. that said I'll be dropping the story here.