Dungeon Incursions, Books 1-5

A Slow-Burn Apocalyptic LitRPG

For Lance, the incursion of monsters and a magical shop isn't as much of an apocalypse as an inconvenience.

Coming back from archery practice, Lance and his club are in the right place and right time to deal some mayhem for the spawning monsters. But just killing them as they come out of the portals isn't enough.

They're going to have to go in and finish the job.

Dungeon Incursions is a slow-moving apocalypse, where the system doesn't lead to societal collapse but changes in civilization itself. Not solo OP MC but team-based dynamics. Fans of post-apocalyptic and apocalyptic LitRPG fiction like Primal Hunter and Defiance of the Fall will be thrilled!

This includes books 1 through 5 of Dungeon Incursions.

©2023 Adam Bright (P)2024 Adam Bright

OK..until the end

What the hell happened at the end? The last book was terrible and short. it's like the author just gave up. there were changes between tense and the writing seemed like someone else tried to do it.

I’m lost

I don’t get this story from my understanding they know a lot about lit RPG and RPG thanks so why is it that they’re not putting any of that to use in this story they know how the stuff operates they know from what they’ve read and what they’ve seen but yet they’re putting none of it into use. It makes no sense whatsoever this the story is ridiculous.

great world but the MC is dumb as a box of rocks

The MC rune this litrpg, For one he wants to be a murder Hobo but lacks the brains or power to be one. in book 5 he had options but instead of using his head he chooses to attack the non-aggressive lizardmen who was guarding the portal. they could have joined the attacking side by trying to talk to the lizards and been able to beat the portal without all the stupid crap in-between. But no they wanna try killing everything without a real plan or even trying not to go the Murder Hobo root. MC throughout the books always failed to come up with even a half good plan, yet the others fallow his decisions like the blind without a single opinion of their own. This is the second time in my life I find myself rooting for the monster to kill the mc. Just to get rid of the main issue of the story.

is it a draft?

The first 4 books were mediocre but okay as background entertainment while doing tasks. But the last part of the last book was mostly a draft.
keept changing between 1 person and observer narrator as if there was no proofreading done and the draft slipped buy.

Stopped at chapter 13, "that ability sucks" poetic

Just a giant rush of almost a story. No plot development, character development, just chaos. I could write more but it does not deserve it.