The Oncoming Storm

Angel in the Whirlwind, Book 1

By: Christopher G. Nuttall

Narrated by: Lauren Ezzo

In the year 2420, war looms between the galaxy's two most powerful empires: the tyrannical Theocracy and the protectionist Commonwealth. Caught in the middle sits the occupied outpost system Cadiz, where young officer and aristocrat Katherine "Kat" Falcone finds herself prematurely promoted at the behest of her powerful father. Against her own wishes, Kat is sent to command the Commonwealth navy's newest warship, Lightning.

Determined to prove she has value beyond her family name, Kat struggles to earn her crew's respect and find her footing as the youngest captain in naval history. She soon discovers the situation on Cadiz is even worse than anyone in power anticipated. War isn't just a possibility - it is imminent. Yet the admiral in position to bolster defenses refuses to prepare for a fight. Can Kat find a way to investigate the enemy, alert the Commonwealth, and whip an entire fleet into fighting shape before the Theocracy's war machine destroys everything she holds dear?

©2015 Christopher G. Nuttall. (P)2015 Brilliance Audio, all rights reserved.

Military SF comfort food

I dig Christopher Nuttall. While this kicks off a series that isn't anything you can't find in a Weber, Bujold, or Campbell novel, Nuttall is such a fun and skilled author that you still get drawn in. I trust when I see his name that I have an enjoyable literary meal in front of me, of that down home Sunday dinner varierty. Nothing out of the ordinary but always satisfying and leaces a smile on your face after.

Ok book

Story was good but the Narration was so bad I couldn't tell male from female.

Enjoyable, but could have used some revision

Another space opera by Nuttall. A lot of the same predictable themes that he really likes to use - inexperienced officer thrust into a position they weren't prepared for; young officers compromised and either blackmailed into betrayal or given an intervention by a fatherly "tough love" minded superior officer; lots of talk about military etiquette and personal relationships.

Oh yes, and the really harsh military justice he likes to imagine in future space navies. At one point there was a brief comment that talking disrespectfully about a superior officer behind his or her back was a court martial offense! I imagine that more than half of any army could be court martialed on that premise!

There's a lot of awkward writing that I had to go over a few times before realizing what was going on. It definitely could have used some revision and editing.

Here's an interesting plot hole for you, which is a minor spoiler if you care about that kind of thing: They sneak up on the system where the enemy is staging their invasion fleet in order to get proof that they're preparing for war. The enemy detects them and they run. As they do, the main character laments that there's no such thing as ship-based faster than light communications, and have to make their way into friendly space to spread the word using their big sciencey communication thingy.

The only thing is that the enemy manages to send a signal ahead of them to sabotage the big sciencey communication thingy, so they were thwarted.

What???

How did the enemy get the signal ahead of them when Nuttall had just finished specifically saying that such a thing was impossible? If the crew of the Lightning couldn't get a signal into friendly space before coming into the system, how could the enemy do it?

Nobody suspected the enemy of having some sort of better FTL communications. Everybody just shrugged their shoulders, like, "Damn! They sent a signal ahead of us! We should have thought of that possibility!!"

The one thing happened right after the other. Nuttall just invented a technological limiting factor for his universe and then completely ignored it right afterwards!

Regarding the narrator, I have to agree with others that she wasn't great. She wasn't a deal breaker for me, but if you have low tolerance for that kind of thing you might find yourself annoyed by her.

Overall, I liked the book. It's rough, and the story isn't spectacular, but it's a serviceable space opera and Nuttall mixes things up bu exploring different ways that space travel and space battles work in this universe.

Ms Ezzo's performance good, but lacked...

Ms Ezzo's performance good, but lacked enough diversity to differentiate some of the characters. I hope she improves, in future episodes.

Good Story, Narration very bad.

Love the story that Nuttall has put together. The narration on the other hand was very bad. All the male roles sound like they have a head cold and are all stuffed up.

Fun story and Great Series Start

First: Lauren Ezzo did a fantastic job. Her delivery strong and I felt she added to the overall experience. She has a tendency to pronounce everything exactly which I got used to very quickly.

Nuttall delivers with his novels, which is what originally drew me into his stories with Ark Royal. We've got a far future corporate aristocracy vs. a "theocracy" or religious oligarchy at a high state of tension and ideological conflict.

I liked the main character. She's intelligent, brave, dutiful, and humble. Nuttall didn't fall into the same trap as some other novels where he made here a tactical or strategic genius as well. She's resourceful and interesting to follow.

This is solid and entertaining military sci fi and I think it's worth a read. :)

Another good book from Christopher Nuttall great.

The presentation was great and the book flowed smoothly. Hopefully he does not deviate from the core story in future books of this series, and he does not get tired of writing this story line, leaving us hanging like he did with The Empires Corps series.

Worst narration ever

Lauren Ezzo has to be the worst narrator ever. In addition to her lackluster halting monotone voice, she constantly mispronounces words. Two of the most cringe-worthy for me were "corpsman", which she pronounced cores-man and "Cadiz", which she insisted on pronouncing as Kuh-DIHZ. This story would have been ever so much more enjoyable with someone like Barbara Rosenblat or Stefan Rudnicki. As it was, I had to stop listening and switch to the Kindle version. The narration was just that bad.

The story was engaging and I enjoyed it, despite it being reminiscent of Honor Harrington and Kris Longknife. I enjoy a female protagonist who knows how to take charge and win through despite the odds.

I will not buy any of the other audio books in this series because of the unbearable narration. I will stick to the Kindle versions.

Horrible narration!

It’s hard to enjoy this book with the horrendous narration. I don’t want to seem sexist, but the female narrator for this one can’t successfully perform other voices in the story. It’s more than annoying. She doesn’t even seem to try in most cases. When she does try it’s so very stilted it wrecks the storyline as she is adding in personality that isn’t there or that changes the character for what it was intended to be.

Up to Nuttall usual writing

Would you consider the audio edition of The Oncoming Storm to be better than the print version?

The story is fine, but the delivery is poor because the narrator is unable to do a believable male voice for any character