I want to give constructive feedback.

I love that you’re doing this. I love your ideas. I believe that you can be *actually be really successful. And from an internet stranger. Like me and all others. Take our reviews like water off a ducks back.

Constructive criticism- I see through your episodes you’re finding “your voice”, and you’re style. IMHO I think you would do really well in a less “preforming” and.. ughh, the only word I can think of is gusto. Less gusto. IMO (that’s all this is) I can see you being the next (But So Much Better) “bore you to sleep* podcast. Which is insanely popular. And really not very good…. Ad a touch of ASMR, keep using your passion. I hear you reading the words other have wrote. Trying reading the words others have wrote, like you wrote them. They are your words and your experiences.

Keep your cadence at one pace. You tend to change it a lot which is distracting. The harshness of the hard C’s P’s D’S SH’s B’s ST’s would be so much more lovely a bit softer. It will keep your tone even and homogenized which is much more relaxing to listen to. I understand where you’re going with your emphasis, but it’s jolting.

Rhetorical question. How many times do
You read these before preforming and posting them? Maybe try a couple more times and ALWAYS. Listen to your future post at least 3 times before posting. It sucks but that’s how you’ll get there the fastest.

You really** have talent. I wish I could post my email, I do this for a living. You’re. Talented. and try one with my advice, no need to post it. Just try it out and see how it feels. You got this my stranger

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