Messy Strokes

An Enemies-to-Lovers, Single Parent Romance (Wrecked Roommates)

By: Kelsie Rae

Narrated by: Lucie White

I should’ve told Milo.
That I loved him.
That I was pregnant.
That I didn’t want anyone else, except him.
But I didn’t.
Instead, I left.
I ran.
Now he’s here, in the hospital after I delivered a baby girl he’s convinced belongs to him.
But the truth is, I have no idea.
I’ve sacrificed so much to keep my past hidden. To keep my baby safe from her other potential father.
It’s a secret I’ll take to my grave.
Or at least, I planned to until Milo forced me to move in with him, causing me and my daughter to pop up on a certain someone’s radar, whom I never wanted to see again.
People might say life gets messy sometimes....
But they have no idea just how much chaos will ensue if the truth comes out, after I’ve done so much to keep it in the past.

©2021 Kelsie Farmer (P)2021 Kelsie Farmer

Could have been better

If you can get through the poor narration choice and immaturity level of M then yea it’s a good book. However, the narrator was not the correct pick IMO, she was monotone and low when doing any male parts. She was obnoxious and screechy when narrating the story and female characters. They asked why about 500 times like children do 🤦🏻‍♀️
Overlooking all of that and ya get a story that could have been about 10 chapters shorter

Good book, but had a hard time hearing the person talk

For the actual book, it kept me on my toes and excited. But the back and forth with Milo was just a little repetitive but I guess that’s just his character. The voiceover for this one was a bit rough. One of the chapters completely cut off, there were some awkwardly placed pauses, and my main issue: I had an extremely hard time hearing her for more than half the book when she voiced Milo. I had to turn it up a lot when Milo would talk and then as soon as it returned to Maddy, I had to turn it back down because it returned to a normal volume. This is the only review I’ve done so I hope this makes sense. Good book but the recording needs revision.

There’s a glitch that needs to be fixed

The end of chapter 27 is completely cut off. It ends in the middle of a sentence. Besides that I couldn’t get enough of this book!

Dragged on a little

Parts of it drug on and were frustrating but overall was a great story. The narrator’s male voices were a little weird.

Horrible Narration

The storyline was good enough but was definitely drawn out longer than needed. The narration was horrible. The female character’s voice was whiny and the male character was just a whisper.