Defiance of the Fall 6

Defiance of the Fall, Book 6

By: TheFirstDefier, JF Brink

Narrated by: Pavi Proczko

The Lich King Adriel is gone and Earth has avoided being drowned in deadly Miasma.

Yet an even greater dangers lurks in the dark, and Zac is running against the clock. The Great Redeemer bears down on their planet, guided by Void's Disciple and his children.

Everything points toward the mysterious base built by the Technocrats. That's where the Dominators are hiding, and even the remaining invaders have set their sights on the powerful treasure within.

And it might even be the key to solve the mystery of Zac's background.

Book 6 of the hit Defiance of the Fall LitRPG series. Grab your copy today!

About the Series: Jump into a story that merges Apocalyptic LitRPG elements with eastern cultivation. Class systems, skill systems, endless choices for progression, it has everything fans of the genre love. Explore a vast universe full of mystery, adventure, danger and even aliens; where even a random passer-by might hold the power of a god. Follow Zac as he struggles to stake out a unique path to power as a mortal in a world full of cultivators.

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Writing needs a better editor

I’ve thoroughly enjoyed this story so far, but the writing needs help. The constant use of words like “however”, make it seem like a good portion of the descriptions are afterthoughts with lazy fixes.

Great story and ideas, but poor writing and slow progression.

Narrator is fine, aside from the oft cringe-worthy demon voice (but you get used to it I guess). With danger of sounding too critical, as I have enjoyed the books so far, I will take a moment to gripe about the writing.

Writer has a lot of great ideas, and the world and story is interesting, but loses focus throughout the books, slowly shifting focus of writing (earlier was much more progression focused in concrete ways). It just feels like there is a serious lack of planning. It felt like very little of real substance happened in the book, and the story is taking baby steps. At this rate, there will be 100 books before the story is done (which means I’ll never get to read the end of the story because chances of writer burning out before story is over at this rate is high :( )

As for actually writing, someone get this writer a proper editor. Some of the turns of phrase like “look in the mouth of a gift horse”, in a single sentence, and incessant, lazy, or odd use of e.g “screamed danger”, “was shocked to X but soon i.e. understood” in a single sentence, or “by now”, or “spread out” (when there are so many options like permeated/inundated the area, exploded from the epicenter of, blasted from, etc..) could be worked through with good editor in my opinion. I get that it is from royal road and chapters are published at a high pace, editors cost money, etc., but it just has so much more potential!

missing end of chapter 3

it seems chapter three was cut short in the audio. cuts off in the middle of a sentence.
Great book apart from that, so far!

Fantastic Lit RPG

Solid adventure character developing series. Enjoyed entire listen, will continue the series!
Definitely would reccomend

good book

a verry good book and narrator i would recommend thats book to everyone verry good

helps me at work and gaming

Helps me get through the loneliness at work and it also gives me ideas for my pen and paper gaming

Amazing as usual! Story and voicing.

the book is great and continues the story in a solid way. voicing is great as usual.

great as always!

awesome performance and great story. It got a bit monotonous compared to the others but there is so much we could ask this far into the series! Still a great book!

Outstanding!

Loved the story, characters and narration!
Book 6 and still going strong. Can't wait to listen to Book 7.

cant wait for 7

great story line progression. great world building and op characters to kick bad guy ass.