Future Retold

By: Daniel Pierce

Narrated by: Alexander Cendese

Fight to build a free world. Face new enemies. Slay new monsters. Meet new women.

With Aristine at his side, Eden Chain technology will connect Jack's new people as they get ready to go to war, but Kassos - the city of intrigue and fear - is not what it seems.

There's a new threat in the region, known as the Procurators, and they are using the past against Jack and his people - nanobots.

War is coming, and Jack is determined to win at all costs.

Warning: This story contains adult situations, coarse language, and other fun things. Listen at your own risk.

©2019 Daniel Pierce (P)2019 Podium Publishing

Great, but light.

The characters are somewhat flat, and I feel the story could be far more fleshed out. Still, the world building, and variety of characters make for a great series of adventures. Entertaining listen. Thanks!

amazing story

love the narrator and the story just keeps getting better and better!!! was disappointed this book was only 5 hours long thought but nevertheless an amazing 5 hours!!!

Excellent Story.

Daniel Pierce has a refreshingly modern way of expressing reality through fantasy similar in style to masters like Robert Heinlein, Jules Verne, and H.G. Wells.

Fun fast read. Will read next in the series.

This book was a good, fun read. Still has OP MC and harrem, but sex isn't too pervasive. If you read the rest you will like this one.

Good but more of a filler book

Daniel Pierce adds more context to the novel by introducing at a surface level the existence of more advanced level enemy but only tangentially makes contact with them. There is forward plot movement but most of the story came across as a filler book. Still, the book was still interesting but less so than previous books in the series.

Alexander Cendese performance was still quite good but there are so many new and remaining characters that he's taken to create his new harem addition with a deeper vocal tone, not quite male but not quite female sounding, either.

decent read

The book itself is okay and would've likely gotten four stars but there are two issues. First, the books are critically short and second and more importantly. Jack Bowman is a TERRIBLE commander and shouldn't be in charge of tactics, ever.

Beware, spoilers ahead. At one point a "massive" enemy army is heading towards the Free Oasis. Jack and his followers know this. They're even tracking them using the drones. They could take this army out, quite easily so. He decides not to, to try and save the life's of these raiders and try to recruit them.

He proceeds to completely underutilize the tech and weapons available to him. Allowing this army to attack the Free Oasis, is completely caught off guards by their infiltrators and pays a staggering amount of lives for his plan. Which sees the drones take them out by putting them to sleep, allowing them to spare most of the enemy.

During this fight, several of the named characters including Aristine survive SOLELY because of plot armor. He's so obsessed with trying to spare these people and attempt to recruit them. People he can't logically trust nor should he at any point in the near future. He bleeds his own forces white, risks complete annihilation and exposes several of his girls to danger they needn't be in while also cockily underestimating how much of a risk this army poses.

The number given at the start for Free Oasis population is about 2000. In this single fight, he manages to get 83 of his own combatants killed. That's almost 5% of his overall population and likely a HUGE part of his fighting forces. Nobody calls him out on it, everyone treats this as a victory.

The kicker? They also let the enemy combatants leave. Even though they still outnumber them quite badly. Then they are happy when some of them return to join them and immediately allow them to do so. Easiest to infiltrate group ever.

Jack is a terrible commander, the needless loss of life of his own troops is staggering and his priorities seem to be completely messed up when it comes to preserving life. It would be incredibly easy for spies or an entire fifth column to infiltrate his group and wreak havoc or take it over entirely and the way he's spending his own troops lives he should both quickly run out of them and have some serious moral issues before long.

Best one so far

Buck Rogers don't have squat on Jack. love the witty banter and hadn't laughed this much in some time. Can't wait to hear more.

Love the concept of this series

I love this series, especially the concept. The only issue I have is how graphic the sex scenes get as the story goes on.

I love this series

This whole series is amazing and I love it. I can't wait until the 5th book is available because I've read and listened to this series several times already. That is how awesome this story is!!!

Future Retold

Introduction:

Greetings, fellow beings of the cosmos. I am Kiba Snowpaw, an alpha male Ice Wolf from the icy realm of HowlStrom. Having lived for over 36 winters and being an avid gamer, I've ventured into the realm of audiobooks to quench my thirst for stories. Today, I shall share my thoughts on "Future Retold" by Daniel Pierce, narrated by Alexander Cendese.

Basic Plot Summary:

The tale unfolds in a post-apocalyptic world where Jack, with Aristine by his side, aims to unite his people using Eden Chain technology. However, the city of Kassos holds dark secrets, and a new threat, the Procurators, emerges, wielding the power of the past - nanobots. As war looms, Jack's determination to triumph is tested.

Analysis/Evaluation:

"Future Retold" is a blend of futuristic technology, warfare, and interpersonal relationships. The LitRPG elements are subtly integrated, making it a treat for gamers like me. However, the story sometimes leans heavily on adult themes, which might not be everyone's cup of tea.

Characters:

Jack, the protagonist, is a warrior with a heart. His decisions, though questionable at times, stem from his desire to protect and unite. Aristine, his companion, complements him well, but I yearned to see more depth in her character. The supporting cast adds flavor, but some could benefit from further development.

Structure:

The story flows at a steady pace, with action sequences interspersed with moments of introspection. The LitRPG elements are woven seamlessly, making it accessible even to those unfamiliar with the genre.

Impact:

The tale resonated with me, reminding me of the eternal battles we face in HowlStrom. The challenges of leadership, the weight of decisions, and the importance of unity are themes that transcend realms.

Hook and Thesis:

The allure of "Future Retold" lies in its blend of futuristic warfare and human emotions. It's a tale of survival, leadership, and the lengths one would go to protect their own.

Praise and Critique:

I commend the vivid world-building and the seamless integration of LitRPG elements. However, the overemphasis on adult themes sometimes overshadows the core plot. Jack's decisions, especially in warfare, could be better strategized, considering his background.

Comparison:

"Future Retold" reminds me of the tales of old in HowlStrom, where heroes rise against insurmountable odds. However, the futuristic setting and LitRPG elements give it a unique flavor.

Conclusion:

"Future Retold" is a captivating tale that will appeal to those who enjoy a blend of action, technology, and human emotions. While it has its flaws, it's a journey worth embarking on. As the icy winds of HowlStrom howl in approval, I look forward to more tales from Daniel Pierce.

May the frosty winds of HowlStrom guide you to your next adventure. Until then, stay frosty.