More Than Friends: A Gay For You Short Story

More Than Friends, Book 1

By: Aria Grace

Narrated by: Douglas Dale

Tired of moping around after the breakup of his long term girlfriend, Ryan knew he needed a hookup to get him out of his funk. When he met Drea, he hoped she might be the one. But when he felt more chemistry with her gay cousin, Zach, Ryan felt more confused and terrified than he had in his life. He wasn't gay but he wanted to be with Zach. How could it possibly work? Book one of the More Than Friends series.

©2012, 2014 Aria Grace (P)2014 Aria Grace

good

I can hare some static in the beginning. And also some light/heavy breathing which is distracting.

More Than Friends

Cute Short story. Ryan meets Zach after going home with Zach’s cousin for a one night stand that doesn’t happen. They become friends and the relationship evolves from there. I’ve re-read this book a few times already and I liked getting to listen to the story this time around. The narrator was ok. A little monotone at the beginning but I think once I got used to his voice I didn’t really notice it anymore. And I definitely need to listen to book 2 next, to finish off their story.

Meh.

Any additional comments?

2.75 stars out of 5

Though this has good narration by Douglas Dale, this Gay-For-You short story didn’t feel like it was fully developed.

One of the things that bothered me were rapid-fire POV changes that made it a little hard to follow along – even with the different character voices. If I moved my attention from the narration for even a couple of minutes I got lost and had to back-track.

All in all it’s a quick listen that I think may have been better if it had been a bit longer.

Monotonous narration

The story was ok for such a short one, but the narration was terrible. I don't think they could have found anyone who sounded more bored with what he was reading.

Sweet.

I love these characters. this was an amazing gay for you romance. can't wait for more.


Kathy Banks