Warbreaker's Rise: A LitRPG Adventure

The Connected System, Book 1

De: Troy Osgood

Narrado por: J. S. Arquin

Duración: 19 h y 21 m

Resumen del Editor

The Connected System has come to Earth, bringing with it the apocalypse...

In an instant, life as it was known is gone, replaced by a System called The Connection. It doesn't come quietly as earthquakes rock the planet, the chosen survivors falling unconscious as the Connection takes their bodies and Adapts them.

Lochlan Brady and his family were on their way home from a camping weekend when the Connection appears. He awakens with a new Adapted body, finding his wife missing. Now Loch must survive and thrive in this new world with his two teenage daughters, Harper and Piper. All Loch wants to do is protect his daughters and find his wife.

A chance encounter with creatures straight out of myth will force the family to quickly confront the reality of their new lives, the changed world and give Loch a jump in power. But with that power will come responsibility and more danger.

Along with the attention of some of the most powerful beings in The Connected System.

©2024 Troy Osgood (P)2024 Dreamscape Lore

Good, but

The dad is, well a clueless dad. That isn’t a bad thing, except, he’s supposed to be a gamer and an ex military grunt. Given that I would have expected him to be a little more with it and a little less dumb.

For the way he comes off it’s like he was never in the military at any level and not really a gamer at all. This is fine and overall doesn’t matter much, it’s just the description and action done add up.


Overall though it’s a good story and a fun plot. I’m looking forward to the next book.

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who ever listen to a flat earther explain why the earth is flat, some of the explanations have that vibe. you know what they're saying is bull but they're earnest in there belief. I know introspection and exposition is needed in a book but when you repeat the same thought over and over again you get this a story that's going knowhere quickly. Anyway best of luck this one going to need it

Very good 8.5

Really great start of the series. I cant wait for more, Very original, great narration.

Loved it

Good twist on your usual book of this style I really like the family aspect kinda like a breath of fresh air

good

this book is good just having a hard time getting through the children and the whole family thing is not going well for me.

loving the world building

the story is really good and I'm loving the world building...only negative I have is they talk about their feelings too much before during and after a fight making fights last so long but if that's the only negative thing going forward I'm excited for the remainder of the series

Some really good, a lot bad

The MC is quite annoying. The system comes and he’s most worried about and frets over the small things that make no sense than the actual dangers. He also doesn’t seem to be all there as the most obvious alludes him and it seems like his teenage daughters are more intelligent than him and that’s a low bar. The kids are stupid as hell. They use basic words anyone would know or could guess due to context clues but that have no clue (like what it could POSSIBLY mean to “level up”). The system makes no sense as the life force, experience and fuel for all skills is the same which going by how they use it, they’d never level up as they’d use their energy faster than gaining. Lately, the fact that the narrator uses a different name for some other books REALLY threw me off for a while.

hoe frustratingly detailed it was.

I loved the story but the author was so long winded with descriptions of everything it became very frustrating to listen to. almost turned it off about 5 times.

Osgood Does Not Disappoint

This one has solid action and funny dialogue throughout. Just what I needed today. :) Can't wait for Book 2.

Great start to this series

I think this was a great start to this series. Of especial interest is that this includes a family unit and it was well done